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John
Anybody
123 Any Street
Somewhere, MA 01105
(413) 737-2881
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| Objective |
I am seeking a challenging SALES
MANAGEMENT position where my proven track record, combined
with technical knowledge, will benefit my employer and lead
to advancement opportunities. |
| Education |
University of Massachusetts – Amherst,
Mass., Dean’s List
Bachelor of Science in Biology, 1976 |
| Experience |
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| 10/02 - 11/04 |
American Steel Products
Hadley, Mass.
Account Representative |
| |
Develops district territory with broad responsibilities
to open new accounts, service existing accounts, negotiate
contracts, and manage other Account Representatives. Troubleshoots
problems and implements solutions; prospects new accounts,
and provides leadership and technical knowledge. |
| |
- Increased sales and exceeded quotas.
- I provided technical knowledge in major contracts that led
to sales. |
| 7/00 to 8/02 |
National Steel
Fabricators
Chicago, Illinois 06504
Technical Representative |
| |
Responsible for reversing declining sales and establish
stronger relationships. Developed marketing plan, targeted
major potential customers and helped negotiate new contracts. |
| |
- Became number 2 in sales production for month of May, 2001.
- Received the “Michael Barret” award. |
| 5/98-4/00 |
Steel Imports,
Inc.
Nashua, New Hampshire
Customer Service Manger |
| |
Responsible for managing customer service operations
which included credit oversight, expediting shipments and resolving
bottlenecks. |
| 5/90 - 4/98 |
Anybody Steel,
LLC
Nashua, NH
Owner |
| |
Responsible for purchasing and selling steel
bearings throughout the western district. Other duties include
quality control, inventory management and P&L functions. |
| Associations |
President – North American Steel Association,
4th District |
| References |
Available Upon Request |
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